Ch. 11: Editing for a Professional Style and Tone

·         Appreciate the role of style in any document
o   First, the document needs to be readable- precisely chosen words and sentences that are easy to understand
o   Sentence structure, sentence length, sentence connections, words and phrases, and tone are elements of writing style.
o   Style needs to be clear, concise, fluent, exact, and likable.
·         Write clear, concise, and fluent sentences
o   Clarity
§  Pronouns have to clearly represent which noun they replace.
§  Clarify modifiers
§  Avoid putting too many nouns together
§  Word order should be based on coherence and emphasis.
§  Correct emphasis usually falls at the end of the sentence; at the beginning of the sentence for instructions
§  Use active voice unless the audience doesn’t need to know the agent-then use passive voice.
§  Keep the amount of information in once sentence low so that readers can process.
o   Conciseness
§  Most information in the fewest amount of necessary words
§  Remove
·         wordy phrases
·         redundancy
·         repetition
·         “there is” and “there are” phrases
·         Needless information at the beginning of a sentence
·         Excessive prepositions
·         Clutter Words
·         Qualifiers
§  Use strong, direct verbs
§  Use positive language
o   Fluency
§  Combine related ideas
§  Help readers make connections and keep them engaged by combining related things and using short sentences for emphasis.
·         Use precise language
o   Language can often hide the intended message rather than communicate it.
o   Use simple wording that is relevant to the situation and avoid using jargon- simplify simplify.
o    Keep in mind that someone might not understand an acronym
o   Don’t use clichés or euphemism
o   Don’t make overstatements and be specific
o   Use analogies to explain things
·         Achieve a tone that connects with your audience
o   Your tone is your personality on paper.
o   There are different tones, appropriate for different situation: informal, semiformal, formal
o   For everything besides formal-toned documents, balance your use of contractions.
o   Create a personal connection
o   Use active voice and emphasize the positive.
o   Don’t be too informal and definitely be appropriate
o   Avoid sexist terms by using words that are more inclusive
·         Understand that various cultures have various style preferences
o   Some cultures prefer long, complex sentences; others are looking for respect and politeness over clarity.
o   In some cultures, only animals are referred to as male or female.
o   American cultural references don’t typically make sense outside of the US
·         Understand that words can have unintended legal and ethical consequences
o   Never downplay risks or promise more than you can deliver. Some words and phrases can set you up for failure
o   Make sure instructions are clear. If instructions aren’t clear on certain products, someone could be injured.
o   Don’t focus on attacking the competition; focus on your product instead. When you attack someone it usually speaks to your character more than theirs.
o   When evaluating an employee, instead of offering judgments, talk about the specific, factual things they did that violated policy.
·         Recognize the benefits and drawbacks of digital editing tools
o   Spell check is limited. Saying “I new that” is incorrect, although the word “new” is a word.
o   Pay attention to their and there.
o   Always proofread!

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